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Old 08-09-2007, 09:43 PM   #1
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Hello again everyone! Hope you're feeling great, cause I just made this poem from imagining the scene and living it but it's totally never happened so.....enjoy:
Blind love

I can sense eyes around us moving it's claw,
I'd swear it was strange if i'm not sure of what I saw,
but if it was her then that is really very low,
Cause she did it once i'm telling she will never withdraw,
and that's of course won't bother you, why would I think so?
Yes, I remember once she was your sweety little cat,
you took her over me that horrible evil rat.
Ask me why i'm angry dear, what would be your lost?,
and then i'm telling you what it will really cost.
Go back in your memory to my special day,
the day you said to me the word i wanted you to say.
You told me you love me, you even made it for me a song,
was she on your mind all the time long?
So the love we shared was all just fake?
The time we've spent together was only a mistake?
You've put me on the hold,
I feel like I've been sold.
From who i thought I was his queen,
but all this time I was unseen.
Tell me you're joking and non of this is true,
and you were missing around and you still do,
Cause I would take anything comes from you,
you don't know how much I love you, you even don't have a clue
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Old 08-12-2007, 08:29 AM   #2
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this is nice. But i guess i read it somewhere !!
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Old 08-12-2007, 10:29 AM   #3
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Blind love

But there is a sense
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Old 08-12-2007, 04:39 PM   #4
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yea u think so swallow
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Old 08-14-2007, 02:17 AM   #5
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Old 08-14-2007, 09:52 AM   #6
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thanks alot for that bb and swallow and semsem, ur great members
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