A pray that will help

[auguries of innoc]

The pray of the innocent


The birds pray
For peace, for justice
The sky cries
At the death of a man
The beauty is shy
For seeing the sins of a man
The mountains collapsed
When it couldn’t see the blood’s color
Man kills man
Devil kills angels
Innocence dies in the jungle of the blood

Why

Don’t a man let the man live?
Don’t evil disappear in the darkness?
Don’t an angel teach the people to love again?

Why

A child grow up drinking violence instead of the milk
Greed is planted in the heart of an angel.
Peace is erased from the plant
Heroes are born by the without courage
Sadness is the life people like to live
If they have happiness the give it away
If they have every thing they give it away to nothing

Every thing turned to dust
Under the legs of the devil
People turned to demons ,sinful
To serve the devil


God this is the pray
From the grave
To
Save us
Save the people of the earth
Save your slaves from Satan

Please god
Save us

[oos]

realy this is the first poem which i understand it
realy this is the first poem which i like it
realy thanks very much
did you write this poem ?

[Big brotheR]

who is the poet?

[auguries of innoc]

thanks very much oos, yes I wrote this poem
please tell me what you think about it, I mean as a critic

[oos]

dear auguries of annoc
frankly i dont understand rythum
but i reply on your poem rely on its meaning
when i read your poem i feel something i can not express it .
so (in my view)you have great skill in making poem
so go in