Fear me, I am the child.

[Swall0w]

Fear me, I am the child



I am the phantom of your night

I am the owner of this house

I ll fight the thieve, I know no fright

I am the seed of the earth you spoil

I am the avenger of my sister

I am the soul that is in the soil

Fear me, I am the child


I am the memory of your crime

I am the body full of hate

I am the prophet of your time

Just wait for me,I want be late

Fear me,I am the child


Look back now at what you have done

Shot a child and meant the man

Fear the sword of the man I become

Fear me, I am the child



by Karim Khayal

[auguries of innoc]

what a nice poem, how could he portrayed the child turning into man wooooooooow. it is great

[Swall0w]

what a nice poem, how could he portrayed the child turning into man wooooooooow. it is great

i admire of this peom when i read it, it's wonderful.

thanks auguries of innoc,

[Big brotheR]

what a nice poem, how could he portrayed the child turning into man wooooooooow. it is great

well, children always been a symbol of innocence; therefore, i do not think portraying the kid turning into a man will strip him off this feature that attracts the sympathy of s many people no matter who they are.

[auguries of innoc]

Yes Big Brother you're right but I meant that when he made him carry the actions of men. this makes the world sympathy with this child who lost his childhood for the bad treatment of others. It also drives a wonderful copmarasion between who are called " MEN" and who has the guts to act like men although they are not named so.

[Big brotheR]

but does anyone notice that there are some errors!!

one more thing, what doed he meant by "meant the man"; it does not make a sense to me! :(

[Swall0w]

well, children always been a symbol of innocence; therefore, i do not think portraying the kid turning into a man will strip him off this feature that attracts the sympathy of s many people no matter who they are.

new informations for me

thanks B.B

[Swall0w]

but does anyone notice that there are some errors!!

one more thing, what doed he meant by "meant the man"; it does not make a sense to me! :(

oh, i haven't any idea of poetry
i just read it

[Rifugiata]

surely they have to fear him
nice choice
Just wait for me,I want be late

Fear me,I am the child
I think u meant wont here :)
many thanks for sharing

[No0rA_PalesTiniaN]

nice poem. thnx

[amy]

nice poem

thats the palstanian child

http://aycu22.webshots.com/image/18061/2001262366105952137_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2001262366105952137)

[SEES]

i like it alot
its a very good poem


good job
thank u